the bar graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by US teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
bar graph demonstrates the number of fast food consumed by American adolescents in Belle High School from 1975 to 2000.
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Initially
, the graph covers a period of 25 years
which span
from 1975 to 2000. The consumption of fish and chips Correct subject-verb agreement
spans
figure
recovered from its dip in 1980 Verb problem
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at
over 80, Change preposition
to
then
it emerged in 1985 at about 95. However
, it then
plummeted over the rest of the period to conclude
with just under 40 in 2000. Although
, hamburgers utilisation soared through the initial years
, beginning at about 10, then
approximately 95 in 1990 where it begins to level off. Moreover
, hamburgers number soared untill
1990 when it began to stabilize, yet the little Correct your spelling
until
increament
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increase
lead
it to reach over 100 by the year 2000.
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Further
analysing the paragraph, pizzas share similar behaviour as hamburgers. The number of pizzas consumed by US youngsters in 1975 was just about 10. Whereas
, by the following years
it rose to approximately 10 numbers per annum, untill
1995 when it began to stabilize.
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until
Overall
, the graph shows an opposite trend between fast food utilisation of three different meals. It can be seen that hamburger is the favourite fast food among high-schoolers and it's
utilisation has gotten a sharp rise over the time span of 20 Correct your spelling
its
years
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