The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment statuses.
The graph illustrates the entertainment
time
enjoyed by males and females in five different types of employment status.
Overall
, the amount of relaxation time
of people who do not work was higher than people who have jobs. Men
usually have more free time
than women
. Specifically, there are two parts in this
chart that do not mention men
.
About
employment, people who have full-Change preposition
Regarding
time
jobs do not have excessive time
for entertainment, at 45 hours
for males and 35 hours
for females. About part-time
jobs, in
Change preposition
apply
this
part just have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
women
information, females spend 40 Change noun form
women's
hours
in free time
. Meanwhile, the spare time
of the unemployed is highest with men
at 85 hours
and women
at 78 hours
.
Men
and women
who are retired have more time
for relaxation, at 82 hours
and 79 hours
respectively. Housewives have more time
off when they work at home, at 40 hours
and the men
's data was not mentioned in this
part.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women, hours with synonyms.
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