The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The maps show the development of Stokeford from 1930 to 2010, highlighting significant changes in infrastructure and land use over time.
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the initial map from 1930, Stokeford was primarily a rural area, with a small number of houses located near the bridge and along the main road. Farmland dominated the region, with a few essential services Linking Words
such
as a post office, shops, a primary school, and a large house surrounded by gardens.
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It is clear that
the area Linking Words
had
transformed significantly. Wrong verb form
has
It is clear that
much of the farmland has been converted to residential areas, as numerous new houses were erected. The large house and its gardens remain, but a retirement home was constructed nearby, marking a shift in the community’s purpose and demographics.
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Overall
, the village has changed considerably with the expansion of housing, the demolition of farmlands, and the conversion of open spaces into a more urbanized environment with new buildings and facilities.Linking Words
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