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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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This
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 line graph represents the
ratio
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 of family
car
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 ownership in the UK from 1990 to 2015. There is
also
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 a prediction
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 from 2015 to 2030. The data is separated into three categories, based on the number of
cars
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 owned starting from zero to two or more
cars
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 in one category.
Overall
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, the
ratio
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 of
families
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 with two or more
cars
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 was the lowest in 1990.
However
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, it starts rising significantly until it reaches a 41%
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, respectively. In reverse, the
ratio
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 of
families
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 with no
car
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 is the highest. But it starts declining significantly until it reaches an approximately 15%
ratio
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. Starting from approximately 12% in 1990, the
ratio
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 of
families
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 with two or more
cars
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 is the lowest. It reached the lowest
ratio
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 in 2005, lower than 10%. But after that, it increased significantly until 2015
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 and is predicted to pass the 40%
ratio
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 in 2030. In reverse, the
ratio
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 of
families
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 with no
car
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 is the highest (51%, respectively).
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 there
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 a slight rise in 2010, the trend tends to decrease until it is predicted to fall to approximately 15%
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. Different from the categories mentioned, we cannot conclude the trend of
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the percentage
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 of
families
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 with one
car
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.
However
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, it hit its peak in 2005, with a 55%
ratio
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, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, car, cars, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 12 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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