The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
This
line graph represents the
ratio
of family
car
ownership in the UK from 1990 to 2015. There is
also
a prediction
ratio
from 2015 to 2030. The data is separated into three categories, based on the number of
cars
owned starting from zero to two or more
cars
in one category.
Overall
, the
ratio
of
families
with two or more
cars
was the lowest in 1990.
However
, it starts rising significantly until it reaches a 41%
ratio
, respectively. In reverse, the
ratio
of
families
with no
car
is the highest. But it starts declining significantly until it reaches an approximately 15%
ratio
. Starting from approximately 12% in 1990, the
ratio
of
families
with two or more
cars
is the lowest. It reached the lowest
ratio
in 2005, lower than 10%. But after that, it increased significantly until 2015
,
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and is predicted to pass the 40%
ratio
in 2030. In reverse, the
ratio
of
families
with no
car
is the highest (51%, respectively).
Although
there
is
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a slight rise in 2010, the trend tends to decrease until it is predicted to fall to approximately 15%
ratio
. Different from the categories mentioned, we cannot conclude the trend of
percentage
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of
families
with one
car
.
However
, it hit its peak in 2005, with a 55%
ratio
, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, car, cars, families with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 12 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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