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kind
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kinds
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apply
the 
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are
dinner
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while
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snack
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snacks
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are utilised
breakfast
.
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breakfast
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Dinner
dinner
 leads the way in terms of sodium usage with 43% followed by lunch, which expends 29%.
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breakfast
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spends
 the lowest amount with 16%. At lunch and Correct subject-verb agreement
spend
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dinner
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dinner,
were
 chosen by comparatively higher part than snacks, 37% and 26% utilization, Change the verb form
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dinner
 foods at 23%. Lunch comes in third with 19% followed by Use synonyms
breakfast
 at a slightly lower number of 16%.Use synonyms