The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The given pies below illustrate the mean parts in representative meals of three
kind
of nutrients, all of which can be harmful if eaten Change to a plural noun
kinds
to
much.
One striking feature is thatReplace the word
too
,
Remove the comma
apply
the
sodium and solid fat Correct article usage
apply
is
superior in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
dinner
, Use synonyms
while
the sugar which we add prevails in Linking Words
snack
. Both saturated fat and sugar Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
utilize
equally at Wrong verb form
are utilised
breakfast
.
Looking at the pie chart related to sodium, it forms 14% of the foodstuff of Use synonyms
breakfast
and bite, which is the deepest compared to the other meals. Use synonyms
Linking Words
While
Correct word choice
Dinner
dinner
leads the way in terms of sodium usage with 43% followed by lunch, which expends 29%.
In terms of soaked obese, at Use synonyms
breakfast
Use synonyms
spends
the lowest amount with 16%. At lunch and Correct subject-verb agreement
spend
Use synonyms
dinner
solid fat Add a comma
dinner,
were
chosen by comparatively higher part than snacks, 37% and 26% utilization, Change the verb form
was
accordingly
.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the added sugar has different portions. In respect of usage, snacks come first with 42%, Linking Words
then
Linking Words
dinner
foods at 23%. Lunch comes in third with 19% followed by Use synonyms
breakfast
at a slightly lower number of 16%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, breakfast with synonyms.
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