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The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the
overall
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score
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 of 3 health
centre
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 services:
Longston
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, Peveril and Marchbank from many
patients
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 based on 5 attributes. Peveril
Centre
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 was the best place for health services, with an
overall
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score
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 of 8.3. Marchbank was second with 7.2 points, and
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Longston
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Langston
 had the lowest
score
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, 5.8. Looking at the table for detailed information, Peveril
Centre
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 was evaluated with the highest
score
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 for their responses to the patient's concerns.
Pharmacy
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 was the attribute that had the lowest point from
patients
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' evaluations with 6.3. For Marchbank, most
patients
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 were satisfied with doctors' service so
this
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 attribute had the highest points. And like Perevil
Centre
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, Pharmacy was
also
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 the service that had the lowest satisfaction from
patients
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 with 5.8. At the bottom of the rank, most scores of
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Longston
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Langston
Centre
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 were below 7. Only the service of doctors had the highest
score
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 with 8 and the response to concerns was the lowest points of
Longston
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Centre
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 with 4.3.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words score, centre, longston, patients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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