The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the
overall
score
of 3 health
centre
services:
Longston
, Peveril and Marchbank from many
patients
based on 5 attributes. Peveril
Centre
was the best place for health services, with an
overall
score
of 8.3. Marchbank was second with 7.2 points, and
Longston
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Langston
had the lowest
score
, 5.8. Looking at the table for detailed information, Peveril
Centre
was evaluated with the highest
score
for their responses to the patient's concerns.
Pharmacy
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was the attribute that had the lowest point from
patients
' evaluations with 6.3. For Marchbank, most
patients
were satisfied with doctors' service so
this
attribute had the highest points. And like Perevil
Centre
, Pharmacy was
also
the service that had the lowest satisfaction from
patients
with 5.8. At the bottom of the rank, most scores of
Longston
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Langston
Centre
were below 7. Only the service of doctors had the highest
score
with 8 and the response to concerns was the lowest points of
Longston
Centre
with 4.3.
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