The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the
overall
score
of 3 health centre
services: Longston
, Peveril and Marchbank from many patients
based on 5 attributes.
Peveril Centre
was the best place for health services, with an overall
score
of 8.3. Marchbank was second with 7.2 points, and Longston
had the lowest Correct your spelling
Langston
score
, 5.8.
Looking at the table for detailed information, Peveril Centre
was evaluated with the highest score
for their responses to the patient's concerns. Pharmacy
was the attribute that had the lowest point from Add an article
The pharmacy
patients
' evaluations with 6.3. For Marchbank, most patients
were satisfied with doctors' service so this
attribute had the highest points. And like Perevil Centre
, Pharmacy was also
the service that had the lowest satisfaction from patients
with 5.8. At the bottom of the rank, most scores of Longston
Correct your spelling
Langston
Centre
were below 7. Only the service of doctors had the highest score
with 8 and the response to concerns was the lowest points of Longston
Centre
with 4.3.Submitted by hothimyhoa26 on
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