The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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by children aged five to twelve years in a particular country to mobile to and from school using five different transportation modes (car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and Add a missing verb
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