The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares how many
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trips
made
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by children aged five to twelve years in a particular country to mobile to and from school using five different transportation modes (car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and
bus
, and
bus
). The units are measured in millions of
trips
per
year
.
Overall
, at the beginning of the
year
, a significant majority of children reached school and went back home by walking.
Moreover
, the number of
trips
made by car passenger kids witnessed a sharp growth,
while
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for the other modes of transport fell in 2010. In 1990, a majority of
trips
from and to school were by walking, standing at approximately 12.5
million
per
year
.
However
, the
figure
then
significantly decreased by half from the beginning period to precisely 6
million
in a
year
.
On the other hand
, the
figure
of children who became car passengers had a sharp increase from around 4
million
to almost 12
million
in a
year
. Regarding the remaining
trips
made by other modes of transport, the
figure
by
bus
fell moderately by almost 2
million
in a
year
.
Similarly
, both
trips
by cycling and walking and
bus
started at around 6
million
in 1990, before dropping significantly to 2
million
and about 3
million
, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, bus, year, figure, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trips
  • children
  • modes of transport
  • walk
  • cycle
  • public transport
  • drive
  • car
  • trends
  • decrease
  • increase
  • shift
  • convenient
  • comfortable
  • commuting
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • significant
  • indicate
  • reasons
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • 20-year period
  • doubled
  • considerable margin
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