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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the amount of
land
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 covered by
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forest
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forests
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 in different continents over a period from 1990 to 2005. The unit was measured in
million
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hectares
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.
Overall
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, it
can be
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is
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 evident Europe had the majority of forested
land
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,
whereas
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 very few
number of
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apply
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forest
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 areas were present in
the
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apply
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Oceania.
To begin
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 with, Europe
covers
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covered
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 989
million
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hectares
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 of
forest
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land
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in1990
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in 1990
, and
gradully
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gradually
 area increased to 1001
million
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hectares
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 in 2005. In
Africa
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Africa,
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 a decline in forested
land
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 was observed over a period of 15 years from 749 to 691
million
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hectares
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.
Similar
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A similar
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 trend was
also
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 observed in South America
forest
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 lands
were
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decreased from 946 to 882
million
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hectares
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 in 2005.
Furthermore
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, the amount of forested
land
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remain
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remains
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unchange
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unchanged
 in Asia, North America and Oceania with around 570, 705 and 198
million
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hectares
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 respectively for a given of time.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, forest, million, hectares with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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