The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the types of leisure activities that the senior citizen in Europe did in their free time
in
1980 to 2010. Change preposition
from
Overall
, a significant growth can be seen in hiking whereas
reading, going to theatre
and watching TV fluctuated over the period given.
In 1980, there were only 20% Add an article
the theatre
people
who went on a hike. This
number had a 20% growth every decade and reached its peak in 2010 with 80% of the population. Likewise
, internet surfing also
had an upward trend. It started with around 5% in 1980, and slightly increased to 15% in 2000. This
number then
increased by three-fold in 2010 to 50%.
In contrast
, watching TV began with the highest persentage
Correct your spelling
percentage
in
the beginning of the period which was 60%. There was a slight increase until the 2000s when it dropped to approximately 65% of elderly Change the preposition
at
people
. Furthermore
, There were around 30% elders
who loved reading in 1980. Change preposition
of elders
However
, this
number fluctuated during the next 20 years and ending
with a notable increase accounting for 60% of Wrong verb form
ended
people
in 2010. Similarly
, elderly
who visited the theatre Correct article usage
the elderly
also
experienced a decline during 1990 and this
percentage rose gradually and allocated around three-quarters of people
in 2010.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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