The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides us with the recent renovations done to a university from 2010 until now.

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with, the most eye-catching feature shown was the lake and lawn and seating areas which were located in the middle with special features,

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as the grass.

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the south and west sides,

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they showed

the main feature of the campus which was student accommodation where the buildings look similar with the same colour but just different height levels.

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, on the east side, there are shops and restaurants located next to each other. By the road on the north side, it has a teaching block for art and science students. On the other side of the road is the location of the university offices. Taking everything into consideration, the improvements done to the campus are really up to date with the trend now. But there are things they need to improve which

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growing some grass on the campus

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unable

to have an eye-catching and not

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dry lawn.