The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The images show developments of a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
At first glance, a road can be seen stretching across the centre and the southern
side
of the campus. There is also
a lake in the middle of the area and trees scattered around. Buildings have also
been established since the
2010 and some Correct article usage
apply
are
maintained until now.
The major change that happened was the removal of the lawn and seating area, that once surrounded the lake. A restaurant and some shops Wrong verb form
have been
at
the south-eastern Change preposition
on
side
of the lake were also
demolished to provide space for a new building, which is an accommodation building, accesible
by a newly extended road. The essential Correct your spelling
accessible
ammenities
were relocated to the southern Correct your spelling
amenities
side
, that
was once an apartment for those studying there, Correct pronoun usage
which
in addition
of
other facilities, Change preposition
to
for
example
offices. There is Add the comma(s)
example,
also
a new building for students' housing erected near the previously established one in
the western Change preposition
on
side
. In the north, university offices and a teaching block have been rebuilt into a science building and an arts building respectively.
In summary, the complex have
seen improvements to allow a more comfortable place for scholars.Change the verb form
has
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