The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps

dipicts

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depicts

depict

the changes in a

university

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campus from 2010 until now. In the first

maps

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map

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, student

accomodation

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accommodation

are

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placed in the

west

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western

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area

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. At the top of the map, the

area

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is provided for

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university

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the university

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office and to the left of it is the teaching block for arts and science. The east part shows

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area

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an area

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for shops and

restaurant

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restaurants

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. The lake is placed exactly in the middle with

lawn

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a lawn

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and seating

area

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surrounding it. The

university

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campus

hads

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has

had

seen slight changes over the years. School

accomodation

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accommodation

accommodations

have

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has

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been

expand

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expanding

expanded

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into two buildings. In the

north

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northern

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part

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part,

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it is shown that

university

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offices have been turned into science

building

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buildings

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Teaching

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The teaching

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block has

also

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been converted into

arts

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an arts

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building. Shops in the east

pasr

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part

past

has

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have

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been replaced with student

accomodation

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accommodation

. The restaurant in the

south east

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southeast

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area

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has been demolished and turned into a pathway. The lake remained as it

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was

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, but the lawn and seating

area

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surrounding it

has

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had

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been removed.

Overall

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, the

university

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map

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

campus
renovation
infrastructure
facilities
sustainable
accessibility
layout
pedestrian zones
transportation routes
parking facilities
greenery
sports center
lecture halls
demolition
modernize
expansion
enhancement
comprehensive development

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