Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside for children is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places for children to grow up?

Nowaday

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Nowadays

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, many people

prefers

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prefer

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their

children

to grow up in the city rather than living out of

town

.

This

essay discusses some advantages and disadvantages of growing up in the city and the

countryside

. It is convenient for the

childern

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children

to attend a better school if the

children

growing up in the

town

.

Majority

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The majority

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of the high-band

schools

are located in the

town

and there are different types of kindergartens or primary

schools

for the parents to choose

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For instance

, international

schools

and public

schools

. The parents have more options to choose a better school to suit their

children

's

need

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needs

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. The

schools

can provide a good learning

enivorment

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environment

and teaching resources.

In

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result

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a result

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, the

children

would gain more academic knowledge and enter

to

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apply

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a better

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better schools

a better school

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schools

for their

further

learning.

However

, there

are

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is

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more

distration

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distraction

distractions

for the

children

if they

living

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live

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in the

town

. There are lots of

entertainments

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entertainment

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for the

children

. The

children

may spend time

to watch

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watching

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tevlevision

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television

, playing computer games and watching

Youtubes

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YouTube

videos. The more time they spend on

theses

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these

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entertainments, the less time to spend on their academic studies. Their

leaning

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learning

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motivication

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motivation

notification

will be reduced and the exam

result

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results

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will be affected. It may bring some health issues

such

as obesity and

eyes

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problems. Growing up in the

countryside

, the

children

can learn a lot of

lifeskills

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life skills

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and learn to be an independent person. In the

countryside

, there are not many electronic devices to

distration

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distract

the

children

. The

children

can play more interactive games with other

children

.

For example

, play

hide-an-seek

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hide-and-seek

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, learn how to plant

the

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vegetables or build a little treehouse by using

the

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natural materials. It can strengthen the fine motor skills of the

children

and

enhances

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enhance

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their social skills. The

children

cannot enjoy learning the new

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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like AI and

latest

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the latest

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courses in the

countryside

.