The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

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The given line chart shows

the

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information about the production level of major

fuel

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fuels

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in the United Kingdom, broken down into three different types: petroleum, coal, and natural

gas

, between 1981 and 2000.

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, it can be clearly observed that both

petroluem

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petroleum

and natural

gas

experienced an upward trend,

whereas

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coal underwent a downward trend.

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, it is interesting to note that petroleum outnumbered the other two energy resources throughout the given time frame.

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with, in 1981, at about 85 energy

unit

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, oil accounted for the largest

productions

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level among all others.

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the amount of coal produced in

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the UK

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was 80, that of natural

gas

was roughly half of it at 40 in 1981. It is noticeable that

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petroluem

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petroleum

level reached

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140 during

1980s

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before slowly

dropped

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to 100 in 1990. Coal,

on the other hand

expereinced

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experienced

fluctuation during the first three years with dramatically fall to 40 and

bounced

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back to 60 till 1990. Natural

gas

remained stable at the same figure before slightly

rose

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in 1990. From 1991 onward, Petroleum rose to 140 again in 1996 before ending with

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peaks at above 140 before 2000.

While

natural

gas

increased at a constant rate to just over 100 in the end, coal

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reverese

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reverse

trend of falling at under 40 in 2000.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

221 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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fluctuation
overall decline
depletion
shift in energy policies
global oil prices
extraction technology
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