The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph illustrates the amount of goods shipped in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different means of transport.
Overall
, the UK Linking Words
had
dependent most on road shipments, and least on pipeline method, as its modes of transporting goods over the given period. It is Verb problem
was
also
noteworthy that shipments increased for all modes except rail, which was essentially unchanged.
Roads were the dominant means of transport Linking Words
in
the beginning of the period, with 70 Change the preposition
at
million
tonnes have been Use synonyms
tranpostred
in 1974. Correct your spelling
transported
This
figure continued to increase steadily, and by 2002 it Linking Words
reacehd
almost 100 Correct your spelling
reached
million
.
Even though water and rail Use synonyms
shipment
Fix the agreement mistake
shipments
strated
with the same numbers of 40 Correct your spelling
started
million
, they Use synonyms
demonstarted
Correct your spelling
demonstrated
an opposite paths
in 1978. Water Correct the article-noun agreement
opposite paths
an opposite path
tranport
grew to a little under 60 Correct your spelling
transport
million
and hovered around that number Use synonyms
while
rail experienced a Linking Words
considerale
Correct your spelling
considerable
declines
after 1978 but its figure stayed the same Fix the agreement mistake
decline
at the end
.
Linking Words
Lastly
, Linking Words
pipeline
was the least popular of all modes, Add an article
the pipeline
a pipeline
Linking Words
however
it Add a comma
however,
Correct your spelling
increased
inceased
from 5 to above 20Correct your spelling
decreased
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