The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph illustrates the amount of goods shipped in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different means of transport.
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, the UK
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dependent most on road shipments, and least on pipeline method, as its modes of transporting goods over the given period. It is
also
noteworthy that shipments increased for all modes except rail, which was essentially unchanged. Roads were the dominant means of transport
in
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the beginning of the period, with 70
million
tonnes have been
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transported
in 1974.
This
figure continued to increase steadily, and by 2002 it
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reached
almost 100
million
. Even though water and rail
shipment
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shipments
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strated
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started
with the same numbers of 40
million
, they
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demonstrated
an opposite paths
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in 1978. Water
tranport
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transport
grew to a little under 60
million
and hovered around that number
while
rail experienced a
considerale
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considerable
declines
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after 1978 but its figure stayed the same
at the end
.
Lastly
,
pipeline
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the pipeline
a pipeline
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was the least popular of all modes,
however
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it
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increased
inceased
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decreased
from 5 to above 20
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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