The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph reveals data about how fish and four types of
meat
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eaten in a European country during a twenty-five-year period from 1979 to 2004.
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, it is clearly seen from the graph
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that all of the figures witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken. Interestingly, chicken became the most consumed
meat
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of the total types. At the beginning of the period, (1979), beef was the most eaten
meat
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at approximately 220
grams
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and
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after some fluctuations it ended with 100
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in 2004. The figure for Lamb
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started
with
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150
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per week,
then
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went down to approximately 120
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before decreasing
further
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and
at the end
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of the period was at the level of 75
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per week. Fish was the lowest, at the level of 65,
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after years of extremely slow decrease finished at 50
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per week in 2004.
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, chicken began with 145 and after seeing a little increase
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30
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in 1999, it went up and reached its peak at the level of 250 in 2004 and ended up being the most consumed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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