The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph reveals data about how fish and four types of
meat
are
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were
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eaten in a European country during a twenty-five-year period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the graph
is
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that all of the figures witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken. Interestingly, chicken became the most consumed
meat
of the total types. At the beginning of the period, (1979), beef was the most eaten
meat
at approximately 220
grams
and
then
after some fluctuations it ended with 100
grams
in 2004. The figure for Lamb
meat
started
with
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at
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150
grams
per week,
then
went down to approximately 120
grams
before decreasing
further
and
at the end
of the period was at the level of 75
grams
per week. Fish was the lowest, at the level of 65,
thereafter
after years of extremely slow decrease finished at 50
grams
per week in 2004.
In contrast
, chicken began with 145 and after seeing a little increase
by
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of
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30
grams
in 1999, it went up and reached its peak at the level of 250 in 2004 and ended up being the most consumed.
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