The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph reveals data about how fish and four types of
meat
are
eaten in a European country during a twenty-five-year period from 1979 to 2004.
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were
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the graph is
that all of the figures witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken. Interestingly, chicken became the most consumed Unnecessary verb
apply
meat
of the total types.
At the beginning of the period, (1979), beef was the most eaten meat
at approximately 220 grams
and then
after some fluctuations it ended with 100 grams
in 2004. The figure for Lamb meat
started with
150 Change preposition
at
grams
per week, then
went down to approximately 120 grams
before decreasing further
and at the end
of the period was at the level of 75 grams
per week. Fish was the lowest, at the level of 65, thereafter
after years of extremely slow decrease finished at 50 grams
per week in 2004.
In contrast
, chicken began with 145 and after seeing a little increase by
30 Change preposition
of
grams
in 1999, it went up and reached its peak at the level of 250 in 2004 and ended up being the most consumed.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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