The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table shows information about the
number
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of
oil
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being produced each day in four African countries from 2000 to 2004.
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, there was a gradual increase in Somalia and a significant shift in the
number
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of
production
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was seen in Chad. In 2000, Somalia accounted for only 5000
barrels
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. It increased by three-fold in 2002 with around 17000
barrels
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and rocketed to 50000
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of the period.
On the other hand
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, Chad had 0
production
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during the first three years.
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, it allocated around 8000
barrels
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in 2003 and
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number
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boomed to 50000 in 2004.
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, the daily
oil
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production
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in Congo had a downward trend. It began with the highest amount of
production
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around 275000
barrels
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and kept decreasing over the years and reached its lowest
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slightly above 200000. Nigeria's
oil
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factories produced 205000
barrels
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of
oil
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in 2000.
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number
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rose to approximately 190000
barrels
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in 2002 and went up to 215000
barrels
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at the end
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of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, oil, production, barrels with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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