The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows information about the
number
of oil
being produced each day in four African countries from 2000 to 2004. Overall
, there was a gradual increase in Somalia and a significant shift in the number
of production
was seen in Chad.
In 2000, Somalia accounted for only 5000 barrels
. It increased by three-fold in 2002 with around 17000 barrels
and rocketed to 50000 at the end
of the period. On the other hand
, Chad had 0 production
during the first three years. However
, it allocated around 8000 barrels
in 2003 and this
number
boomed to 50000 in 2004.
In contrast
, the daily oil
production
in Congo had a downward trend. It began with the highest amount of production
around 275000 barrels
and kept decreasing over the years and reached its lowest number
with
slightly above 200000.
Nigeria's Change preposition
apply
oil
factories produced 205000 barrels
of oil
in 2000. This
number
rose to approximately 190000 barrels
in 2002 and went up to 215000 barrels
at the end
of the period.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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