The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the
population
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in
cities
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in 4 Asian
countries
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, including the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia for a five-decade
priod
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period
from 1970 to 2020 and its speculations for 2030 and 2040.
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, the city populations for all
countries
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have risen and it is predicted to experience the same trend in the future. In 1970, Malaysia had 30% of its
population
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resided in
cities
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, witnessed an upward trend by 2020, reaching at the top of the list with about a 45% increase and will
be continued
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this
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steady growth by 2040 to about 80%.
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, Indonesia had
initially
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15% of its
popuation
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population
living in the
cities
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, followed by a progressive increase by 2020, marking it
the
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as the
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second country
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with about half of its
population
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, which is estimated to reach a peak at around 60% by 2040. Regarding the other two
countries
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, at the beginning of the period the Philipines had around one-third of the
population
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residing in
cities
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,the highest among all
countries
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,
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figure peaked at about 50% in 1990,
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then
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and then
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saw an almost steady decline by 2020, and will have risen in 20 years later. Thiland’s proportion of the city
population
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started at just under 20% in 1970, which has grown by approximately 10% and will climb to just under 50% by 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, cities, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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