In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is often argued that

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Most

of

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the

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countries prefer co-education

while

in many countries

boys

and

girls

are skilled in distinct

schools

.In

this

essay, I will discuss

both

merits and demerits of education in different

schools

. To commence with the merits of studying in segregated school

firstly

, it helps

both

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to identify their social identities so

girls

and

boys

have different roles in societies

for example

, it can be seen in many houses,

both

genders have different upbringing by their parents.

secondly

, it is necessary for academic achievement and personal development

however

girls

and

boys

are emotionally, physically, and mentally different from each other.

both

girls

and

boys

can better understand

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their course work

hence

it upgrades their marks beside

this

girls

are more quieter and introverted than

boys

therefore

it is beneficial to study in different

schools

. Towards the demerits, the most crucial disadvantage of studying in the same school is gender inequality, teachers pay more attention to

boys

than

girls

in the same class

while

this

inequality leads to lower

their

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self-confidence that affects

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their academic performance that's why

boys

get more jobs than women.

Furthermore

, studying in different

schools

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environmental problems

for instance

, teachers have to arrange meetings separately with

boys

and

girls

which may be problematic in delivering ideas and

to understand

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the cultural values of each other.

To sum up

, segregated

schools

have

both

advantages and disadvantages

hence

learning in different

schools

makes

boys

and

girls

more confident and have

strong

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personalities so segregated

schools

have more advantages.