The chart below give information on Internet use at home in Australia between 2011 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar charts show home internet use in Australia with three main categories : Social networking , paying bills online and online banking , and emailing by age
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between 2010 and 2011.
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Overall
, it was important that all ages use networking for connectivity with others which means Australia has a very good education system; the first chart shows clearly that the Linking Words
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between 15 and 24 years old was the highest Use synonyms
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among others which is 4x higher than 65 and over the Use synonyms
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on the other hand
, the Linking Words
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of 65 and overused the emailing the most of the time ; Use synonyms
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, other groups had been using email as well ; Linking Words
moreover
, the second chart illustrates that Linking Words
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over 30 years old were mostly used for paying bills online or online banking Use synonyms
while
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between 15 and 24 were the lowest.
In conclusion, by summing up these provided examples and Use synonyms
explanation
, the graphs show that everyone was using the internet among all the groups and young people were using social media compared to others .Fix the agreement mistake
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