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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more logically. Ensure that each paragraph has a single focus or idea, which will help in maintaining coherence.
task achievement
Make sure to fully develop each point you want to make, and include all parts of the task (e.g., how the good news affects your life, inviting your friend over).
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The tone of the letter is warm and consistent with informal letter writing, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and a closing, which adds to the cohesion of the letter and shows good understanding of letter structure.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
While some people prefer reading books to watching TV or playing games on a computer ,others have different opinions and claim that watching TV and playing games have more benefits.From my point of view,I agree with the former view.In the following paragraphs,the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail.
Nowadays, in scientific research, innocent animals are sacrificed. According to some people using animals for research should be outlawed, while others think animal experiments are vital for scientific discoveries. There is no justification for animal abuse, as there should be alternative options to practice such tests. It is only justified if there are valid reasons to justify the statement for animal research tests.
In the modern world, technological development is accelerating rapidly. Some people believe that this rapid progress will lead to the disappearance of traditional cultures. However, I can only partly agree with this assertion because, on the other hand, advancements in technology also provide greater opportunities for cultural inheritance.
Some people argue that, due to the advancement of technology people have become closer, while others argue that new technology is the reason to separate people more. This essay agrees with the argument that “new technology makes people closer” and discusses it further.
Sport is an athletic activity that requires skills in which an individual or team has to compete against each other. While certain people believe that sports educate children to become competitive, others think that teamwork is what children learnt from involving in sports. This essay will discuss both views and state my opinion.