Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days,

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you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a

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, you see news about international

students

and their sufferings. The question

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what makes

them suffer there? Many people give different

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about the

students

who are dealing with anxiety and

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management

issue

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. I completely agree with the

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statement

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solutions, that I believe

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best for them. Nowadays, many individuals are moving

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abroad for higher studies. Many reporters claim that

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the number of working

students

are

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increasing day by day. Because of their work routine

students

are not able to give proper

time

to their education. Even

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they feel under pressure because of the

toughtime

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tough time

tough times

they have been facing there.

However

, there are many reasons behind it.

Firstly

, most

students

are from undeveloped nations and their countries can not afford

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scholarships

for them.

Secondly

,

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are from poor backgrounds and their parents can not look after their expenses, which is the major factor

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behind

their labour in

international

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the international

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world.

Thirdly

, the

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of the

universities

are too high.

Last

but not least,

taxes

are the main burden on the

students

. All these factors

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students

to go on a job and have enough money to pay the university and the

government

in

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of tax.

Moreover

, there are numerous

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that can help

in reducing

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the burden

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the

students

,

also

it

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them relax and in

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the world will have

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suicide cases. The

government

of those countries can play a huge role in it. At

first

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the

taxes

on the

students

should be

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, because it is hard for the

students

to pay

taxes

to the authorities,

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at the

time

when they

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to pay

feeses

.

Additionally

, the

universities

should reconsider their fee structures and try their level best to make it less costly.

This

initiative by the

universities

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authorities and the

government

will shrink the burden on the

students

. They will be able to pay more

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to their studies, rather

then

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earning money.

Hence

, it is proven from the above argument that

students

from

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undeveloped nations, do not have enough resources to pay the bills and

feeses

in other countries,

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during

their education. For

this

, they search for jobs before they enter

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the

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universities

, which thrust them

in

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serious problems of

the

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time

managment

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management

and anxiety.

However

, only

government

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the government

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and

universities

can lessen their hurdles

through

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minimizing

taxes

and university

feeses

.