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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
tabel
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table
 chart illustrates the
amount
 of
oil
 production
everyday
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 in four countries,
Niegeria
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Nigeria
, Chad, Congo and
Somalia
 over
5-year
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a 5-year
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period
 between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
, It can be seen that Congo produced the largest number of
oil
 until 2003.
However
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 It was surpassed by Nigeria by the end of the
period
. It is notable that,
Although
,
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 Chad started
make
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making
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oil
 later than other
contries
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countries
 in 2003, It was
same
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the same
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quntities
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quantity
to
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as
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Somalia
 in 2004. Looking at the graph more closely,
It is clear that
 the
amount
 of
oil
 production in Congo decreased
throunghout
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throughout
 the time
period
,
While
Somalia
 Increased quickly over 5 years. The
amount
 of
oil
maden
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made
 in
Somalia
 accounted for 50.000 in 2004 which was 10 times more than the
begining
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beginning
 of the
period
 in 2000.
On the other hand
, The
oil
 generation in
Negeria
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Nigeria
 dipped
at
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to
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 190,000 in 2002 and increased Next couple
years
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of years
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, which was the highest
amount
 among
four
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the four
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 countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, oil, somalia, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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