the chart below shows how anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows how anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology
graduates
while
their salary after five years'
work
in three different sectors has been compared in the table.
Overall
, most
graduates
opted for full-time
work
, with those entering the government sector generating the highest revenue. After graduation, almost half of the students chose to
work
full-time. Part-time workers made up 15% of all Anthropology
graduates
' community, followed by 12% of anthropologists being unemployed. After finishing their undergraduate degree, full-time postgraduate students accounted for 8%,
while
only 5% decided to do part-time
work
along with
the postgrad study.
However
, the destination of 8% of these students remained unknown. Comparing
Anthropologists
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salaries in more detail, those who worked in the government sector had higher salaries, with half of them generating over $100,000 after five years. At the same time, the majority of private employees, almost one-
third,
earned between $50,000-74,000. Meanwhile, 80% of freelance consultants were paid over $75,000. In terms of the lowest salary, 10% of
graduates
who worked in private companies earned between $25,000-49,999,
while
the population halved in the other two employment.
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