The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
All three maps illustrate Meadowside
village
and Capitalize word
Village
Fonton
before and after it was developed from 1962 to 1985, and then
redeveloped to be a suburb in present.
The village
is much smaller than Fonton
, a neighbouring town, which is located on the east of it. There is a small road
from southwest to northeast the
Change preposition
of the
village
, while
there is a railway
running from southeast to northwest the
town. Meanwhile, they Change preposition
of the
did not connect neither
by Rewrite the sentence
did not connect either
connected neither
road
nor
Correct word choice
or
railway
.
From 1962 to 1985, the village
was expanded and completely transformed with the addition of some facilities. The road
was enlarged with a new road
to the east, which linked the Village
to Fonton
. A housing estate has been constructed on the west, and a superstore has been built across from the estate on the southwest. A leisure complex has also
been opened up on the north east
of the Correct your spelling
northeast
village
.
In the period from 1985 onward, the Meadowside has seen
dramatic changes and became Wrong verb form
saw
Correct article usage
a suburbs
suburbs
. A train station has been built between it and Fix the agreement mistake
suburb
Fonton
, with a new railway
running from the station to Fonton
. Near the station, a hotel and a business park have been developed on the north and the south respectively. The old railway
over Fonton
remains the only feature which remains untouched.
In conclusion, the village
has experienced a great transformation in the development of its area and facilities.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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