The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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All three maps illustrate Meadowside
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village
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and
Fonton
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before and after it was developed from 1962 to 1985, and
then
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redeveloped to be a suburb in present. The
village
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is much smaller than
Fonton
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, a neighbouring town, which is located on the east of it. There is a small
road
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from southwest to northeast
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village
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,
while
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there is a
railway
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running from southeast to northwest
the
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town. Meanwhile, they
did not connect neither
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did not connect either
connected neither
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by
road
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nor
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or
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railway
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. From 1962 to 1985, the
village
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was expanded and completely transformed with the addition of some facilities. The
road
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was enlarged with a new
road
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to the east, which linked the
Village
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to
Fonton
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. A housing estate has been constructed on the west, and a superstore has been built across from the estate on the southwest. A leisure complex has
also
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been opened up on the
north east
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northeast
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of the
village
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. In the period from 1985 onward, the Meadowside
has seen
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dramatic changes and became
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a suburbs
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suburbs
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suburb
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. A train station has been built between it and
Fonton
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, with a new
railway
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running from the station to
Fonton
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. Near the station, a hotel and a business park have been developed on the north and the south respectively. The old
railway
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over
Fonton
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remains the only feature which remains untouched. In conclusion, the
village
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has experienced a great transformation in the development of its area and facilities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, fonton, road, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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