The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
All three maps illustrate Meadowside
village
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Village
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and
Fonton
before and after it was developed from 1962 to 1985, and
then
redeveloped to be a suburb in present. The
village
is much smaller than
Fonton
, a neighbouring town, which is located on the east of it. There is a small
road
from southwest to northeast
the
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of the
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village
,
while
there is a
railway
running from southeast to northwest
the
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town. Meanwhile, they
did not connect neither
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did not connect either
connected neither
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by
road
nor
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or
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railway
. From 1962 to 1985, the
village
was expanded and completely transformed with the addition of some facilities. The
road
was enlarged with a new
road
to the east, which linked the
Village
to
Fonton
. A housing estate has been constructed on the west, and a superstore has been built across from the estate on the southwest. A leisure complex has
also
been opened up on the
north east
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northeast
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of the
village
. In the period from 1985 onward, the Meadowside
has seen
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dramatic changes and became
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a suburbs
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suburbs
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suburb
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. A train station has been built between it and
Fonton
, with a new
railway
running from the station to
Fonton
. Near the station, a hotel and a business park have been developed on the north and the south respectively. The old
railway
over
Fonton
remains the only feature which remains untouched. In conclusion, the
village
has experienced a great transformation in the development of its area and facilities.
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