The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below illustrates the changes which have been planned in a small town called Birshire.

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, Berkshire will have gone through some drastic changes in the future. The town will be reconstructed and become a modern one with its infrastructure

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as roads, a supermarket and a car park. First and foremost, the Farmer’s Market will be built near the Corbie Road. All of the farms in the area, which are Griffiths farm and Hoolahan farm, will have been removed and replaced with a convenience store and a parking space. The residential area houses on McGoldrick Street will be doubled in numbers displacing the shops

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, another change is that the Open field will give its place for a new Sports Centre. Corbie Road will be expanded in length

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a roundabout constructed nearby. Public pay will not be removed from its previous location and is the only place that will not undergo any alterations

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In order to solve traffic jams and home problems, people believe that it can be solved by removing companies, factories and employees to country side. To what extend do you agree?

In many towns and cities,large shopping malls are replacing small local shops.Do you this is a positive development?Give your reasons and examples.

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families

Nowadays, older people who need employment have to complete with younger people. What problems do this cause, and what are the solutions?