The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes in young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The chart illustrates the information on the location of diverse types of
dance
classes
for young people in a town in Australia. Overall
, there are significant differences in terms of ballet, tap, and modern.
As shown, 48% of students
preferred to practice a different type of dance
classes
in a private studio, and then
24% of students
participated in dance
classes
in school halls. Clearly, a significant decrease can show in college-based studios.
In general, there a significant increase can be observed in the age
group
under 11 years of participants in the ballet class dance
to 600 students
. In contrast
, the age
between 11 to 16 was less than the previous age
group
, it has 300 students
. As can be seen, the age
group
has been closed together in tap dance
classes
which shows between 400 to 430 students
in both groups ages. Moreover
, there is a dramatic rise in age
under 11 on the number of students
in modern, it has become 500 students
compared to another age
groupage group
, which was 300 students
.
From an overall
perspective, there are obvious that there several differences in students
ages and the type of Change noun form
students'
student's
dance
class that they joined in AustraliaSubmitted by walkuwari11 on
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