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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes in young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes in young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The chart illustrates the information on the location of diverse types of
dance
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classes
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 for young people in a town in Australia.
Overall
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, there are significant differences in terms of ballet, tap, and modern. As shown, 48% of
students
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 preferred to practice a different type of
dance
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classes
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 in a private studio, and
then
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 24% of
students
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 participated in
dance
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classes
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 in school halls. Clearly, a significant decrease can show in college-based studios. In general, there a significant increase can be observed in the
age
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group
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 under 11 years of participants in the ballet class
dance
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 to 600
students
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.
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, the
age
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 between 11 to 16 was less than the previous
age
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group
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, it has 300
students
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. As can be seen, the
age
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group
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 has been closed together in tap
dance
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classes
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 which shows between 400 to 430
students
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 in both groups ages.
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, there is a dramatic rise in
age
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 under 11 on the number of
students
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 in modern, it has become 500
students
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 compared to another
age
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 groupage
group
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, which was 300
students
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. From an
overall
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 perspective, there are obvious that there several differences in
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students
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students'
student's
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 ages and the type of
dance
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 class that they joined in Australia

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes, students, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • attendance
  • community centers
  • dance schools
  • private studios
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • ballroom
  • analysis
  • popularity
  • accessibility
  • cost
  • cultural trends
  • media influences
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