You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the number of tea,
coffee
,
pastries
and sandwiches that get sold in a
coffee
shop situated in an office building, in 4
time
periods between 7:30am and 8:30 pm on a typical weekday.
Overall
the products that customers get are
coffee
and
pastries
.
To begin
with,
the
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coffee
is noticeable as the best-selling product in de cafeteria, with sales
between
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145 and 265 coffees. The drink is with a big amount sold in the first
time
period in the morning and
last
time
period in the evening, with 265 and 200 coffees respectively.
Furthermore
, tea is purchased mostly in the morning with a total of 110 cups between 110, 50, 35 and 75 respectively in the four periods starting at 7:30 am and ending at 8:30. Both tea and
coffee
are beeing mostly sold in the start and end shifts. Next to the drinking options,
Pastries
and sandwishes are as wel options in the
coffee
shop. The
pastries
are in the begining of the day the most sold with a total of 275 pieces, and with a total of 80 as the least amount
at the end
of the day.
In addition
, sandwishes are the choice of customers with a total of 200 pieces at lunch
time
between 10:30am and 2:30 pm and 140
at the end
of the shift. In comparaison between these two products, the table displays an interesting contrast of the timing where these are sold.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, pastries, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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