The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps compare the changes in the layout of a park in 1980 and today.
In overview, much entertainment has been added to the park, and flower fields have Use synonyms
also
been removed at present.
In 1980, there were trees that took up the upper right corner of the land, and Linking Words
next,
there were a large number of Linking Words
flowers
below the wood. Concerning the left side, a pond and three benches around, plus a small area to the south of the pond was used for planting Use synonyms
flowers
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there were Linking Words
two
gates, one was situated between Use synonyms
two
fields of Use synonyms
flowers
, and another was erected on the left side and beyond the water.
Nowadays, the landscape of the green space has been reshaped. Use synonyms
First,
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Two
doors were dismantled, and Use synonyms
flowers
were replaced by the bush in the lower left corner Use synonyms
as well as
the playground in the lower right corner. Linking Words
Moreover
, the land of the original grove on the right side has been shrunk, and some parts were repurposed as a picnic place. Linking Words
Therefore
, there are chairs, and desks for the public to come to the barbecue. Linking Words
Finally
, one more chair was placed around the pond.Linking Words
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