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The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart presents the number of
households
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 in the United States and their annual
income
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 in three various years namely , 2007 , 2011
hand
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and
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 2015 .
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, for the most part, it is noticeable that the numbers did not show a remarkable change , except for the six figures
households
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 , there was a sharp increase in
this
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 particular rank .
According to
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 the columns , the less than 25
thousand
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 annual
income
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households
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 fluctuate starting with 25
million
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households
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 in 2007 , to almost 30
million
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 in 2011 ,
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 arrive
finally
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 at approximately 28
million
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 .
Likewise
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, the 25 - 49
thousand
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income
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households
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also
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 varied , beginning with almost 27
million
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 in 2007 , 30
million
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 in 2011 , and finishing with 29
million
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 by 2015.
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 , the 50,000- 74,000
thousand
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 annual
income
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 household numbers remained steady with roughly 21
million
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 in all three years .
On the other hand
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households
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 with 75,000 to 99,999
thousand
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income
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 slightly differed in numbers starting about 15
million
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 in 2007 , 14
million
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 in 2011 , and finishing up with 15
million
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 in 2015 . The case was different for the 100,000 or more
income
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households
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 in
this
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 case the starting point in 2007 was 25
million
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households
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 , escalating to almost 30
million
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 in 2011 , and soaring to its peak by 2015 with a dramatic increase reaching 38
million
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households
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, thousand, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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