You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given
process
illustrate
how soft Change the verb form
illustrates
cheese
was producted
.
Correct your spelling
produced
Overall
, it is clear that
there are five main steps in the process
of making soft cheese
, starting with mixing two liquid
including Fix the agreement mistake
liquids
water
and milk and ending with the cooling step.
First of all, the first stage in the process
of making soft chesse
is the adding and mixing of Correct your spelling
cheese
water
and milk. Next,
it is spent
two hours Wrong verb form
takes
with
Change preposition
at
the
temperature Correct article usage
a
about
5 Change preposition
of about
dergee
Correct your spelling
degree
degrees
Celsius
to cool this
liquid which is the
Correct article usage
a
combine
of Replace the word
combination
water
and milk. When this
mixture is completed, the workers will add some salt before move
to the next step in the Wrong verb form
moving
process
of soft cheese
production .
The next stage is the fermentation. It takes two hours at a temperature of 35 degrees Celsius
to make the liquid thicker. The following steps
is Fix the agreement mistake
step
the
evaporation. In Correct article usage
apply
this
steps the temperature Correct pronoun usage
these
reach
the highest Wrong verb form
reached
about
100 Change preposition
at about
dergee
Correct your spelling
degree
degrees
celsius
and Capitalize word
Celsius
was spent
eight hours. Wrong verb form
lasted
Finally
, in the last
stage, the mixture experiences an 8-hour cooling process
at 5 degrees Celsius
, it is became
Change the verb form
becomes
thickest
as Correct article usage
the thickest
know
as soft Wrong verb form
known
cheese
and will be taken by the filter on the top. Whereas
, the waste
Correct your spelling
wastewater
water
will move out by the bottom filter.Submitted by nguyenhoanganhquan918 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cheese, water, celsius with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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