The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee ans bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European counties.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee ans bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European counties.
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The tables provide data on the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in five European countries in 1999 and 2004, measured in millions of
euros
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
sales
of both
coffee
and
bananas
increased over the period, with some countries showing more significant growth than others. Switzerland had the highest
sales
of
bananas
in both years,
while
the
UK
experienced the largest increase in
coffee
sales
. In terms of
coffee
sales
, the
UK
saw a dramatic rise from 1.5
million
euros
in 1999 to 20
million
euros
in 2004, representing the most substantial growth.
Similarly
, Switzerland’s
coffee
sales
doubled, from 3
million
euros
to 6
million
euros
. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden
also
saw slight increases in
coffee
sales
, with Belgium’s
sales
rising from 1
million
euros
to 1.7
million
euros
. For
bananas
, Switzerland maintained the highest
sales
, which increased from 15
million
euros
in 1999 to 47
million
euros
in 2004. The
UK
saw a significant rise as well, from 1
million
euros
to 5.5
million
euros
.
In contrast
, Sweden and Denmark both experienced declines in banana
sales
, with Denmark’s
sales
dropping from 2
million
euros
to 0.9
million
euros
. In summary, Fairtrade
coffee
and banana
sales
saw notable growth in the
UK
and Switzerland,
while
Sweden and Denmark had more modest changes, particularly for
bananas
.
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