In many different countries, shops and products are the same. Some people think ıt is a positive development, while others believe it is a negative development. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays most
shops
and Use synonyms
products
are available Use synonyms
almost
every country in the world Change preposition
in almost
due to
globalization. Some individuals consider that it is a pragmatic evolution, Linking Words
while
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other
say it is a negative expansion. Fix the agreement mistake
others
Although
I am aware of the disadvantages of Linking Words
this
situation I defend it as a positive development.
The similarities between Linking Words
products
and Use synonyms
shops
are becoming a risk for traditional items. It is always easy to reach them and Use synonyms
also
they are popular. Because of these Linking Words
products
and Use synonyms
shop
, the traditional ones are about to disappear Fix the agreement mistake
shops
due to
the price disadvantage compared to these ones. Linking Words
For example
, because of the global Linking Words
coffee
Use synonyms
shops
like Starbucks most of the Turkish Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
shops
were closed and Use synonyms
also
the number of people who drink Turkish Linking Words
coffee
is decreasing day by day. It seems that globalization will soon cause Turkish Use synonyms
coffee
to disappear.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Every country does not have the same technology so some Linking Words
products
can be produced by a country more cheaper than others or some kinds of Use synonyms
products
can be produced by only a few countries. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
situation
people are able to buy things cheaper than normally they can not afford. Add a comma
situation,
For instance
, electric cars are getting more affordable after they started to produce Linking Words
by
China and China is the only one where chips can be produced for cars.
In conclusion, Change preposition
in
Although
there are some negative effects of globalization on Linking Words
products
and Use synonyms
shops
its positive effects are more than its harm and I believe it is a totally positive development.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Try to elaborate further on both perspectives of the argument with more detailed examples and explanations.
coherence cohesion
Ensure smooth transitions between ideas and paragraphs to enhance the overall flow of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Your essay contains a clear introduction and conclusion, adding to the overall coherence.
task achievement
You provided relevant examples, such as the impact of global coffee shops and electric cars, which help support your argument.