The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above table chart demonstrates the number of US family by their annual
income
in three different periods 2007, 2011 and 2015
It is noticeable that the highest percentage was related to people with income
Correct article usage
an income
100,000
or more in 2015. Change preposition
of 100,000
While
the salary between 75,000 to 99,000 received the weakest
percentage in the three years.
It is evident that Correct word choice
lowest
number
of individuals with Change the article
a number
the number
income
less than 25,000 Correct article usage
an income
shows
dramatic growth from 25 to approximately 30 in 2011. Wrong verb form
showed
In contrast
, the 50-74 remained stable in 2007,2011 and 2015 at 20. In addition
, the number of people with 25 to 49 income
show significant rais in 2011 within 30. Apparently, the percentage of individuals with 100,00 or more salary started to increase gradually to reach the peak point in 2015 at 34.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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