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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart illustrates the percentages of each location of
dance
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 classes in Australia, and the second chart classifies the types of
dance
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 classes with respect to age. The two largest percentages belong to private studios and community halls with 48 and 18 percent, respectively. The most
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dance
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 type is the "Ballet", with roughly 600
students
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 attending
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class
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, half of them are under 11 and the others are between 11 to 16 years old.
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, the "Tap"
class
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 is placed in the second rank with approximately 880
students
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, in total. Most of them are above 11.
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, the "Modern"
class
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 is the only
class
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 that has more under-eleven ages. The college-based studios have the lowest percentage among all other locations. Totally, there are roughly 1200
students
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 under 11 and 1350
students
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 are between 11 to 16 years old.
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, based on these numbers, "Ballet" is the most popular
dance
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class
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 in comparison to other classes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, students, class with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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