The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the global
water
use
in Km3 metric and three categories over the years from 1900 to 2000. The table illustrates the consumption of
water
in
Brazil
and
Congo
and
made
Wrong verb form
makes
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some comparisons in population, irrigated land in km2 and
water
use
per person in m3 metric.
Overall
,
water
Correct article usage
the water
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use
trend has
been
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apply
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increased steadily over these years with a higher acceleration from 1950 to 1960.
The
Correct article usage
apply
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Domestic
use
has the lowest volume.
On the other hand
, agricultural uses have the highest volume of 3000 Km3 and it started from 500 Km3 in 1900. Industrial and domestic
consumptions
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consumption
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were roughly constant over the years 1900 to 1950.
Brazil
has
the
Correct article usage
a
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population of 176 million
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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is approximately 35 times higher
that
Correct word choice
than
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Congo
with 5.2 million people.
However
, the
water
consumption per person in
Brazil
is much higher
that
Correct word choice
than
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Congo
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in Congo
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. The irrigated land in
Brazil
is 26500 Km2
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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is larger than
Democratic
Correct article usage
the Democratic
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Republic of
Congo
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, km, brazil, congo with synonyms.
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