The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the global
water
use
in Km3 metric and three categories over the years from 1900 to 2000. The table illustrates the consumption of water
in Brazil
and Congo
and made
some comparisons in population, irrigated land in km2 and Wrong verb form
makes
water
use
per person in m3 metric.
Overall
, water
Correct article usage
the water
use
trend has been
increased steadily over these years with a higher acceleration from 1950 to 1960. Unnecessary verb
apply
The
Domestic Correct article usage
apply
use
has the lowest volume. On the other hand
, agricultural uses have the highest volume of 3000 Km3 and it started from 500 Km3 in 1900. Industrial and domestic consumptions
were roughly constant over the years 1900 to 1950.
Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
Brazil
has the
population of 176 million Correct article usage
a
that
is approximately 35 times higher Correct pronoun usage
which
that
Correct word choice
than
Congo
with 5.2 million people. However
, the water
consumption per person in Brazil
is much higher that
Correct word choice
than
Congo
. The irrigated land in Change preposition
in Congo
Brazil
is 26500 Km2 that
is larger than Correct pronoun usage
which
Democratic
Republic of Correct article usage
the Democratic
Congo
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, km, brazil, congo with synonyms.
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