The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of people, divided by gender, who pursue
full-time and part-time Wrong verb form
pursued
education
in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Overall
, the number
of men and women who had full-time education
was notably higher than part-time during the period given.
There were 1000 male students
who enrolled in full-time education
in 1970. During the next 20 years, this
number
had an
downward trend but it still allocated for more than 800 Change the article
a
students
. In contrast
, there were only one out of ten male students
who signed up for part-time education
. It increased slightly to around 180 students
in 1980 and ended with just above 200 students
.
The number
of female students
studying full-time had
Wrong verb form
has
a
Correct article usage
apply
gradual increase
over the years. It started with around 750 Replace the word
gradually increased
student
, grew to around 800 Change to a plural noun
students
students
and reached its peak with 1100 students
. Part-time female students
also
had an upward trend. In 1970, less than 100 female students
chose part-time education
. This
number
rose for the next two decades allocating for
around 200 Change preposition
apply
students
in both period
.Change to a plural noun
periods
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