The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the information on the rates of Canadians
donate
money to charitable organisations in be Wrong verb form
donating
age
range for the years 2000 and 2015. The proportion is in the percentage.
overall
, the age
range that leads above all
was 35 to 49 and the lowest was 18 to 24. Whereas
, the remaining lies between them.
Firstly
in 2000, there was an upgrade showed
in the initial Verb problem
apply
age
groups which are 18 to 24, 25 to 34 and 35 to 49 by approximately 20%, 28% and 38% respectively. While
, in the range of 50 to 64 and 65 above the percentage drops and ended by around 34% for the former and 31% for the latter.
On the contrary
, in 2015 also
growth was shown in the initial four age
groups by nearly 11%, 25%, 34%, and 37%. However
, in the last
group also
there was a decrement shown by 34%.Submitted by raokaifxc on
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