The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the total
sales
made during the day
for a particular week in October from lunch
and dinner
.
It is clear from the data that dinner
made far more sales
than lunch
. Out of the seven days, Friday had been the most successful for the business whereas
Sunday turned out to be the least effective day
for the restaurant. On average, dinner
made roughly $1000 more from the lunch
.
In contrast
to other days of the week, when compared the sales
during weekends were significantly low, dropping under $3,000 during the night and $2,000 in the afternoon. The average sales
during other days was around $2,500 for lunch
and $3,700 for dinner
.
The most popular day
for the business was Friday as the sales
were relatively high both during the afternoon and night. The least effective day
for the restaurant had to be Sunday as the sales
were lowered by $2,000 for both lunch
and dinner
combined.Submitted by gurvirsingh.baraich on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, day, lunch, dinner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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