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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.
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The diagram depicts the
number
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 of men and women in higher
education
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 in the UK between three distinct periods and their classification whether as a full-time or part-time student. To commence, by 1970-1971 the
number
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 of male part-time
students
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 was substantially high at 1.000.000
students
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,
while
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 those who studied full-time were ten times lower at approximately 100.000
students
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, indicating a notable disparity. By 1980-1981,
although
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 part-time male
students
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 slightly decreased to just above 800.000, those who took part in full-time
education
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 almost doubled to around 200.000. In 1990-1991, part-time enrollment increased by about 50.000 more compared to the previous year,
while
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 full-time
students
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 continued to grow remarkably to nearly 200.000
students
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.
Conversely
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, for female
students
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 in 1970-1971, the
number
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 of female learners was considerably high at almost 800.000
students
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,
whereas
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 full-time
students
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 were almost eight times lower at around 50.000
students
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, illustrating a significant gap.
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, by 1980-1981, part-time female enrollment rose by 50.000, and those who participated in part-time were four times
numerous
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more numerous
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 than in 1970-1971. By 1990-1991 the
number
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 of females who participated in part-time
education
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 and full-time
education
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 continued to increase, climbing to approximately 1.000.000 and 250.000 respectively. To encapsulate, the data reveals there was a fluctuation in male part-time enrollment,
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 male full-time and female
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 in part-time
as well as
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 full-time
education
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 surged throughout the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, education, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • further education
  • full-time study
  • part-time study
  • trend
  • overall number
  • time period
  • gender differences
  • increase
  • decrease
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • societal changes
  • economic factors
  • educational policies
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