The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the changes that happened in the area of
road
access which surrounded a hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, a varied range of changes can be seen, except the situation of ring road
, city road
and hospital Rd.
According to
the picture, in 2007, there were some parking lots near the hospital Rd for both staff and the public. While
, in 2010, this
place was used as a parking place just for staff and the public car park was located in the top right corner of the hospital building. Also
, two squares were added to the area in 2010, which have access to the new bus station located in front of the staff’s parking. The first square is situated at the bottom of the ring road
and the second one is placed in the middle of the city road
. Moreover
, in 2007, the bus stop was outside of this
area in the north-east, which in 2010, was replaced by a roundabout.Submitted by mahtaesmailian on
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