It is believed that people who read for pleasure can develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch tv. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this argument?

Reading helps to develop better imagination and language
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. People who read for entertainment, gain the ability to imagine the situations
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in books. It creates a lasting
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in their minds
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and increases their creativity.
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critical thinking than those who do not.
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, reading books helps a person to imagine carefully, and makes his imagination valid.
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Address counterarguments or alternative perspectives to show a more comprehensive understanding of the topic.
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The essay presents a clear argument about the benefits of reading in developing imagination and language skills.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical progression in the ideas presented, moving from the benefits of reading to its effects on critical thinking and imagination.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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