The diagram below shows the life cycle of salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. as
The picture depicts
lifespan
of fish. There are seven main stages of Correct article usage
the lifespan
cycle
of salmon’s life. Beginning with eggs in fresh water and ending with spawning adult salmon.
There is a period of fish’s life. Add an article
the cycle
According to
the diagram it is begin
with seven eggs which hatched in about three months. Following alevin that feeds off yolk-sae for some weeks. After that fry which is five to ten weeks older and it can almost swim. The next stage is parr which is several months older than fry and develops “finger” markings gradually. There is Change the verb form
begins
smolt
which is one to three years older than previous ones and can head out to sea with Correct article usage
a smolt
group
. Add an article
the group
a group
Next
one is about adult fish Correct article usage
The next
that is
fully developed and spends one to eight years at sea. Afterwards
it Add a comma
Afterwards,
is
spawning adult which spawns and dies meanwhile two weeks.Verb problem
spawns
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