The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The maps illustrate an Olympic and Paralympic village in the years 2000 and 2024.

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, the given information shows how the construct has changed during both years.

According to

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the result, The road located in the middle to separate both sides

remain

Correct subject-verb agreement

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the same ,in the present and Future, similar to the cooperative bank and Prayer Center. In the same area, The supermarket and employment assistance building were added in 2024,

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4 years ago it used to have only one store giving more space for nature. The three farms, in the north on the other side of the road, have changed to the place for poultry

thus

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those two buildings stayed the same.

In contrast

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, The forest has turned into a soccer field, again, changing the natural environment for community use. Even so, on the bright side, the trees have been relocated to the west end. By pointing out the significant

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transform

, The future plan seems to have more constructed buildings and convenience for athletes,

however

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, the old structure contained a more greenery landscape.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

175 words

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The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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