Writing Task 1 The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. You should write at least 150 words

The figure gives information about the proportion of

energy

that was produced from coal in European countries.

Overall

, the graph indicates a clear trend of decreasing reliance on coal for

energy

production

in these countries, with Denmark and Germany showing significant declines,

while

Sweden and France exhibited more gradual reductions. In 1995, Denmark showed a significant reduction in coal

energy

production

. Its coal

energy

production

was around 60% by 1995, but it fell sharply to about 10% by 2010. Germany had the second highest proportion of

energy

produced from coal, starting at around 55%.

This

figure showed a significant decline over the years, reaching just under 10% by 2007, and it showed

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increase to approximately 20% in 2010.

On the other hand

, Sweden had the lowest reliance on coal throughout the period, starting at just under 40% in 1995 and decreasing to nearly 30% by 2010 and

remained

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stable until 2010. France

also

experienced

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pattern, it showed a decrease in coal

energy

production

, starting at 30% in 1995 and dropping to about 20% by 2010.