Writing Task 1 The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. You should write at least 150 words
The figure gives information about the proportion of
energy
that was produced from coal in European countries. Overall
, the graph indicates a clear trend of decreasing reliance on coal for energy
production
in these countries, with Denmark and Germany showing significant declines, while
Sweden and France exhibited more gradual reductions.
In 1995, Denmark showed a significant reduction in coal energy
production
. Its coal energy
production
was around 60% by 1995, but it fell sharply to about 10% by 2010. Germany had the second highest proportion of energy
produced from coal, starting at around 55%. This
figure showed a significant decline over the years, reaching just under 10% by 2007, and it showed Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
increase to approximately 20% in 2010.
Change the word
slight
On the other hand
, Sweden had the lowest reliance on coal throughout the period, starting at just under 40% in 1995 and decreasing to nearly 30% by 2010 and remained
stable until 2010. France Wrong verb form
remaining
also
experienced same
pattern, it showed a decrease in coal Change the article
the same
energy
production
, starting at 30% in 1995 and dropping to about 20% by 2010.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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