The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The given maps

illusrate

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illustrate

the current and

furure

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future

layouts

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2024 of

main

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the main

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road in Farmshir

village

which held

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the olympic

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olympic

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Olympic

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and

paraplympic

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paralympic

competitions.

Overall

it is clear that

in the

future

, the

village

will

loose

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lose

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its rural views and green areas.

Instead

,several recreational places will be added to it. In the northern part of the

village

, there were two farms with some trees and woods.

although

farms will occupy the same areas in the

future

community

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the community

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soccer field will be replaced with woods.

Moreover

, there is another farm just beneath

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one of the other farms, which will change into

poultry

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a poultry

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farm in the

future

with three trees added.

Noteably

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Notably

, the road will remain without changes in the middle of

village

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the village

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which can be seen from

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the north-east

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north-east

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northeast

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to the

south-west

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southwest

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. There are two locations which will stay in the same place namely cooperative bank and prayer center. They can be seen in the east part of

the

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both present and

future

maps. It is

notheworthy

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noteworthy

that

village

store will be

sustituted

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substituted

with

emplyment

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employment

assistance.

Furthermore

, a well-equipped supermarket will be built by 2024.

Notebly

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Notably

, there are some trees

wihich

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which

will be demolished in the

future

by 2024.

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The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

It is the government's responsibility to provide financial support to old people after they retire or individuals should save money for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?

Nowadays some countries encourage people to buy more and more products, which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you