The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The given maps

illusrate

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illustrate

the current and

furure

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future

layouts

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2024 of

main

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the main

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road in Farmshir

village

which held

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the olympic

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olympic

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Olympic

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and

paraplympic

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paralympic

competitions.

Overall

it is clear that

in the

future

, the

village

will

loose

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lose

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its rural views and green areas.

Instead

,several recreational places will be added to it. In the northern part of the

village

, there were two farms with some trees and woods.

although

farms will occupy the same areas in the

future

community

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the community

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soccer field will be replaced with woods.

Moreover

, there is another farm just beneath

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one of the other farms, which will change into

poultry

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a poultry

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farm in the

future

with three trees added.

Noteably

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Notably

, the road will remain without changes in the middle of

village

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the village

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which can be seen from

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the north-east

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north-east

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northeast

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to the

south-west

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southwest

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. There are two locations which will stay in the same place namely cooperative bank and prayer center. They can be seen in the east part of

the

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both present and

future

maps. It is

notheworthy

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noteworthy

that

village

store will be

sustituted

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substituted

with

emplyment

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employment

assistance.

Furthermore

, a well-equipped supermarket will be built by 2024.

Notebly

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Notably

, there are some trees

wihich

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which

will be demolished in the

future

by 2024.

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The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In some country, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity,2010.

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what pressures should be taken to reduce these pressures.

Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.