The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

The given maps

illusrate

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illustrate

the current and

furure

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future

layouts

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apply

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2024 of

main

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the main

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road in Farmshir

village

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which held

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the olympic

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olympic

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Olympic

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and

paraplympic

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paralympic

competitions.

Overall

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it is clear that

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in the

future

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, the

village

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will

loose

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lose

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its rural views and green areas.

Instead

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,several recreational places will be added to it. In the northern part of the

village

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, there were two farms with some trees and woods.

although

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farms will occupy the same areas in the

future

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community

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the community

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soccer field will be replaced with woods.

Moreover

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, there is another farm just beneath

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apply

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one of the other farms, which will change into

poultry

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a poultry

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farm in the

future

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with three trees added.

Noteably

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Notably

, the road will remain without changes in the middle of

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village

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the village

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which can be seen from

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the north-east

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north-east

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northeast

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to the

south-west

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southwest

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. There are two locations which will stay in the same place namely cooperative bank and prayer center. They can be seen in the east part of

the

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apply

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both present and

future

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maps. It is

notheworthy

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noteworthy

that

village

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store will be

sustituted

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substituted

with

emplyment

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employment

assistance.

Furthermore

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, a well-equipped supermarket will be built by 2024.

Notebly

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Notably

, there are some trees

wihich

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which

will be demolished in the

future

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by 2024.

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Oct 14, 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, future with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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