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Band 2

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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Introduction
The table below illustrates the results of a survey
first-year
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students
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 taking diverse courses at the University.
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' satisfaction from
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information
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 to the
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 in the field starting with Economics
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 with commerce.
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In Economic
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satisfied
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55
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while
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 in Teaching quality indicator shows 95%,
tutors
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and tutors
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 support at 92% meanwhile
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 the result is 59%
whereas
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 it is 62%. Law has different results in
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 72% of the
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where
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 in Teaching quality only 67%. The tutor support we can see 79%despite that in printed
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 it is 70%
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 80%.
Conclusion
In
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students
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pleased
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were pleased
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95
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% same as with
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teaching quality and a bit below located Tutor support with the results of 93%
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 indicator shows 81%
simelteounsly
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 it is 86%

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introduction conclusion present
Clearly introduce the subject of the table at the beginning of your essay.
introduction conclusion present
Provide a brief conclusion to summarize the main observations from the data.
logical structure
Use linking words to ensure smooth transitions between different points.
complete response
The essay summarizes the survey data from pre-course information to various resource use effectively.
supported main points
Main features and comparisons between the fields are identified clearly.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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