The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

Inquiry for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom was demonstrated in the graph,in 6

month

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6-month

period. It is clearly seen that Inquiry by

telephone

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and in

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sharply increased in

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period,

opposite

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was true for by

letter

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. From January to March requirements by

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stayed stable, approximately 700 individuals contacted

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a tourist office by

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method. Requests by

telephone

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in 3 months varied between 800 and 1000. Regarding requirements in

person

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all 3 months they

are

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go up from 450 to 800.

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three months individuals

contact

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with tourist office by

telephone

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and in

person

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more than,by

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. From April to June people who applied in

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sharply

rised

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raised

rose

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from 1250 to 1900. Followed by them applications by

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also

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changed in

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period

changed

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600 times. These methods have grown quite significantly, which cannot be said about requests by

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. They have

decrease

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by as much as 2 times.