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The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the information on
acid
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rain
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emissions
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 of four different sectors in
UK
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, over a period of 17 years from 1990 to 2007.
It is clear that
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 the most dramatic decrease in
acid
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rain
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emissions
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 was in the
sector
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 of electricity, gas and water supply
sector
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.
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, the amount of
emissions
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 in the domestic
sector
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 didn't change considerably
overall
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. We can see that the total quantity of
acid
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rain
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emissions
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 fell from 1990 to 2007. The
acid
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rain
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 emission in the electricity, water and gas sectors fell drastically from 3,25
million
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 tonnes to 0,5
million
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 tonnes over a period of 17 years. The number of
emissions
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 in the domestic
sector
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 fluctuated until it reached its bottom in 2007.
Emissions
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 from the transport
sector
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 showed a small increase, and after they reached a peak of 1
million
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 tonnes in 2005. Other industries were responsible for around 1,5
million
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 of
emissions
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words acid, rain, emissions, sector, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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