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The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the information on
acid
rain
emissions
 of four different sectors in
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
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, over a period of 17 years from 1990 to 2007.
It is clear that
 the most dramatic decrease in
acid
rain
emissions
 was in the
sector
 of electricity, gas and water supply
sector
.
On the other hand
, the amount of
emissions
 in the domestic
sector
 didn't change considerably
overall
. We can see that the total quantity of
acid
rain
emissions
 fell from 1990 to 2007. The
acid
rain
 emission in the electricity, water and gas sectors fell drastically from 3,25
million
 tonnes to 0,5
million
 tonnes over a period of 17 years. The number of
emissions
 in the domestic
sector
 fluctuated until it reached its bottom in 2007.
Emissions
 from the transport
sector
 showed a small increase, and after they reached a peak of 1
million
 tonnes in 2005. Other industries were responsible for around 1,5
million
 of
emissions
.
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