The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the information on
acid
rain
emissions
of four different sectors in UK
, over a period of 17 years from 1990 to 2007.
Correct article usage
the UK
It is clear that
the most dramatic decrease in acid
rain
emissions
was in the sector
of electricity, gas and water supply sector
. On the other hand
, the amount of emissions
in the domestic sector
didn't change considerably overall
. We can see that the total quantity of acid
rain
emissions
fell from 1990 to 2007.
The acid
rain
emission in the electricity, water and gas sectors fell drastically from 3,25 million
tonnes to 0,5 million
tonnes over a period of 17 years. The number of emissions
in the domestic sector
fluctuated until it reached its bottom in 2007.
Emissions
from the transport sector
showed a small increase, and after they reached a peak of 1 million
tonnes in 2005. Other industries were responsible for around 1,5 million
of emissions
.Submitted by tyurina.98 on
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