This graph shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
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the amount
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as paper & cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics between 1982-2010.
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the less one indicated plastics.
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By contrast
, Glass containers felt
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then
it continued its upward trend till the end of the period with 60% .
Turning to the Aluminium cans and plastics, they started with 5 and 2 percents
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whereas
the latter one
went up, by
2 % between 1990 to 2010, completing with almost 10% in the final year.Correct pronoun usage
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