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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
presents
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present
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 data on the development of Westley
that
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apply
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has been going on since 1815 till nowadays. It clearly illustrates the extension of the
town
. In 1815 Westley consisted of
a
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apply
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29 houses that
were build
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were built
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 around the
town
 hall and market square. Above them, there was a Church and the woods on the north and the fields on the
south-west
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southwest
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 corner of the
town
. A main road
was connection
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connected
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 the Westley with the Tinton village bypassing the coach inn that was located on the western side of the forest and lord Westley’s house which was standing on the northern corner of the city in front of the woods and the Lake Lenthon. On the western side of the coach
inn
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inn,
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 there was a river with the bridge. Till nowadays the
town
 has
underwent
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undergone
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 a massive modernisation. The settlement of the houses was replaced by
business
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a business
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 and industrial area, the church with a new shopping centre, and the fields with a cinema – only the
town
 hall and the market square have remained
on
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in
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 their original locations. The bridge for cars was replaced by the one for trains and the trucks were constructed with the main railway station in front of the cinema. The
coach
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coaching
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 inn was remodelled into
museum
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the museum
a museum
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 and in the former place of the woods a house settlement was
build
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built
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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