write a letter to the manager of the taxi company to complain aboit the problem faced with the taxi service used by you. when and where you used the taxi describe a problem you have faced? what do you expect the manager to do?

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Dear Sir/Madam I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to express
my
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problem which I
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faced
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week on 20th of March during my trip from Chandigarh to Pune. As you know very well, I have booked your Cab service for one week .
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, when I
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at
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on
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driver
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was almost two hours late to pick me up from the airport .
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, When I sat in the car I got to know that the Car was four-seated only
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, I had paid for
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because we
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all five people.
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, the vehicle is dirty inside .
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, the driver was very rude and arrogant he did not even want to follow our instructions during the trip ,because of
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we could not able to enjoy our road trip. In the
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, I request you to kindly look
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matter as soon as possible and
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, I request you to refund some sort of money
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because
I paid more money when I
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finished
my booking . looking forward to hearing from you yours sincerely, Navdeep
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to organize the ideas more clearly by grouping related issues together and ensuring each paragraph covers a single idea.
Task Achievement
It might be helpful to provide specific details about what kind of refund or compensation you are expecting, as this can make your request clearer.
Greeting and Closing
You have included a proper greeting and closing, which enhances the formal tone of the letter.
Suitable Writing Tone
The writing tone is suitable for a complaint letter as it is formal and respectful.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaint
  • unsatisfactory
  • service
  • incident
  • delay
  • unprofessional behavior
  • fare dispute
  • compensation
  • apology
  • expectations
  • resolution
  • responsibility
  • reimbursement
  • customer feedback
  • service improvement
  • accountability
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