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write a letter to the manager of the taxi company to complain aboit the problem faced with the taxi service used by you. when and where you used the taxi describe a problem you have faced? what do you expect the manager to do?

#manager #taxi #company #aboit #service
Dear Sir/Madam I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter to express
my
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 problem which I
had
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faced
last
 week on 20th of March during my trip from Chandigarh to Pune. As you know very well, I have booked your Cab service for one week .
Firstly
, when I
arrive
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 at
airport
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on
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last
 week
driver
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 was almost two hours late to pick me up from the airport .
Secondly
, When I sat in the car I got to know that the Car was four-seated only
whereas
, I had paid for
6-seater
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 because we
are
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 all five people.
Moreover
, the vehicle is dirty inside .
In addition
 to
this
, the driver was very rude and arrogant he did not even want to follow our instructions during the trip ,because of
this
 we could not able to enjoy our road trip. In the
last
, I request you to kindly look
in
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this
 matter as soon as possible and
besides
this
, I request you to refund some sort of money
beacause
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because
 I paid more money when I
finaI
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finished
 my booking . looking forward to hearing from you yours sincerely, Navdeep
Submitted by navdeepbajaj89 on

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to organize the ideas more clearly by grouping related issues together and ensuring each paragraph covers a single idea.
Task Achievement
It might be helpful to provide specific details about what kind of refund or compensation you are expecting, as this can make your request clearer.
Greeting and Closing
You have included a proper greeting and closing, which enhances the formal tone of the letter.
Suitable Writing Tone
The writing tone is suitable for a complaint letter as it is formal and respectful.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaint
  • unsatisfactory
  • service
  • incident
  • delay
  • unprofessional behavior
  • fare dispute
  • compensation
  • apology
  • expectations
  • resolution
  • responsibility
  • reimbursement
  • customer feedback
  • service improvement
  • accountability
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